The fast food industry has negative effects on our health, the environment and family eating habits, Do you agree or disagree?
In busy life, fast food industry is likely to dominate customer's eating habits. In recent researches, there are many people who clearly know negative effects of junk food but still ignore. In my view of point, I can not agree more that junk food industry has fulfil ability to destroy our health, the environment and family eating habits.
To support my viewpoint, I will sum up three reasons which make fast food become toxic for people's lives and the environment. First of all, looking at healthy aspect, there are many exhausted chemicals in junk food which lead to a number of negative aspects for people's health. One of the most common and perceivable effects of junk food is a rise in obesity because it has high amount of cholesterol level in bloodstream. In addition to gaining weight, frequently eating junk food for a long time, which can lead to diseases about heart and diabetes,...A healthy body requires essential nutrients for its growth and development. While the bad effects of junk food are evident, they lack basic nutrition too. These unhealthy habits, coupled with inadequate nutrition levels, hamper the brain and other parts of your body. Health nutritionists do not advise excess of processed foods as it has long term effects on your body.
Secondly, it can change traditional eating habits in modern families. In view of busy lifestyle, family members tend to buy junk food for their meals because of its convenient so it can lead to lose connection among family members. No one can deny that, cooking is a valuable opportunity for family members have time together after a long day working outside. Moreover, cooking clean and good food is also a best way to express love and take care of others in a family. In detail, junk food does not have nutrition so children need clean food which helps for their development in physical and mental strength.
Last but not least, when using junk food that means we are damaging the environment because of its toxic waste and non-biodegradable packing. Furthermore, high intake of sugars and fats tend to suppress the function of the brain that helps in learning and memory formation. This phenomenon is especially observed in growing children when their learning is at its highest. Results displayed in a sudden inflammation in the hippocampus region of the brain, which is responsible for your memory and recognition. Obviously, it can plummet intelligence of next generation and prevent evolutionary processes.
In short, junk food industry plays an unchanged role in modern life but it has more drawbacks than advantages. So people need to be more flexible and careful in choosing food for family. Actually, using junk food in rational rate can be accepted such as once or twice a week but when people are addicted to junk food they can realize that warning words never superfluous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulfilled
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9769874477 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69830443036 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541841004184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0693721281 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.434782609 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7826086957 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257845961153 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756267980287 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739707995282 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155635929521 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119039928115 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.