Some of the meaning associated with traditional and religious occasions is unknown or forgotten by a group of people through the hustle and bustle of life. However, someone who solely wants to enjoy themselves does not means that they are unconscious about these traditions. From a personal point of view, half of these people are imprudent, but the other half are in dilemmas.
One sadly indisputable fact is that many people nowadays forget or do not acknowledge about most meaning of their traditions and choose to isolate from those who celebrate. The forget ones might 90% be adults, who do not appreciate traditions since these are "complicated and tedious". For example, weddings in ancient Vietnamese society consisted of 2 important days, one was for "engagement party" and one was for "wedding party". But many Vietnamese weddding ceremony theseday underestimate the first day and only celebrate the second one. Another group of people who tend to forget their traditions are the young ones. With smartphones, modern technological devices and a comfortable sofa, teenagers can stay all day long instead of helping parents to prepare traditional dishes for traditional occasions or listen to grandma's mysterious stories about their ancestors.
On the other hand, other people who decide to enjoy themselves in traditional holidays must be in extremely difficult circumstances. For introverts, their shyness is one of the biggest barriers which seperates them from these exuberant activities. When they are given space to contemplate about their traditions, they feel more comfortable as well as having a deeper understand of the meaning of these occassions. For someone who is in a unfortunate dilemma, they definitely know about the beatiful values of traditional or religious festivals, but they have no choice and end up being alone. Take Tet festival for example, most of Vietnamese people know about its meaning, however, due to traffic congestion or the severe affect of Covid-19 pandemic, they can not return home for traditional family gatherings.
In conclusion, a group people chose to divide themselves from dynamic activities as some of them are unawere of their traditonal or religious values. However, a number of people in that group want to enjoy themselves not because they overlook these values, but they are facing some unwanted problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
Some of the meaning associated with traditional and...
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Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...lely wants to enjoy themselves does not means that they are unconscious about these t...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...se to isolate from those who celebrate. The forget ones might 90% be adults, who do not ap...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...te from those who celebrate. The forget ones might 90% be adults, who do not appreci...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...these occassions. For someone who is in a unfortunate dilemma, they definitely kn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43315508021 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06779004407 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53743315508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2963872571 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194794645492 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688765099208 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363616196672 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125336656597 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240652327797 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.