Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In this era of globalization, it is incredibly common for people to watch international movies. While some worry about the concomitant tradeoffs of watching foreign cinema can bring to the nation’s society, others believe it is advantageous in many ways. This essay will discuss both perspectives. I, however, side with the latter view because people get to experience something unique without leaving their own country.
On the one hand, critics cite that there are many negative ramifications engendered by showing foreign movies. Firstly, the populace of a nation, especially younger generations, will be influenced by the western culture, resulting in eschewing traditional culture to follow western culture. For instance, people may prefer to wear fashionable clothes as projected in the movies to emulate the personalities of the characters. Furthermore, this may lead to an injurious impact on the local clothing industry since the demand of their products will reduce due to an increase in the demand of western clothes. Besides this, this deleteriousness can spread to other areas, such as food. The more the influence of foreign films, the greater the negative effect on the society.
On the other hand, the supports of foreign films feel that it is beneficial in many ways. Firstly, viewing films from another countries can bring gratification as well as a great stress-buster. Local people after hard day at work will be able to experience something special and diverse from their local films. This may result in people gaining knowledge of outside world and this, becoming wordly wise. For instance, an American watching a Korean film will get a glimpse of Korea’s culture and people’s lifestyle. Secondly, it is a great way to learn or improve foreign language skills. For example, students who are learning English can achieve significant linguistical improvements by watching English movies since they will be exposed to the correct pronunciation of the words and sentences.
From my perspective, the local citizenry gets an opportunity to understand the foreign culture and visit places virtually by merely watching foreign media. This second-hand experience is beneficial for people who cannot afford to go on holidays abroad.
In conclusion, although showing foreign pieces of entertainment may create some minus concerns, overall, they are marginal in comparison to the pluses. In my opinion, without spending a massive amount of money on trips if people get to experience various countries atmosphere, it is definitely worth voting for.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.445 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98747384926 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8037168731 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0476190476 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285328343903 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794237289589 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543858158181 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146245414931 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433360997966 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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