Last weekend you stayed with a friend. You think that perhaps you left your watch in his house.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Thank him/her
- Explain about your watch
- Say what you want him to do
Dear Moh,
I am glad to hear that you finished the jigsaw puzzle we started together. Last weekend was fun and we should do it more often.
But firstly, I want to thank you for being there just to listen to my problems at work. I really think you gave me wonderful tip to manage my office issue.
I also wanted to check with you on my watch. I think I left my citizen watch in the washroom. I remember placing it on the towel rack prior to showering and I think I forgot to pick it up.
I have told my office driver to pick it up from your house on 2nd of November by 6 O’clock in the evening. Please let me know if you will be home else I will come over the weekend and pick it up myself.
Thanks again for everything and hope we meet soon at my place.
Love,
AJay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Moh, I am glad to hear that you finished the ...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o wanted to check with you on my watch. I think I left my citizen watch in the wa...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... left my citizen watch in the washroom. I remember placing it on the towel rack p...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and I think I forgot to pick it up. I have told my office driver to pick it u...
^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hope we meet soon at my place. Love, AJay
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 634.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0641025641 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0907658346 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2424073887 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242026330713 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894493284571 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673200387932 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121505568236 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595123711756 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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