Some people say that ebook and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines tk what extentdo you agree or disagree?
In the end of the day, no one shop for newspaper and books because the modern technology makes access the internet without money. I agree with this notion, many person find all article in the website without paying. However, buying a books is still important due to not all article find out in the internet.
Firstly, I agree with this notion because society in the world live in modern area, people will more spend their time to access the google. Technological advances have brought many benefits to the world. Technology has taken all the places of the world such as the role printed books. So, people can see many kind of articles
in the smartphone without paying. For instance, in 2021 97% student university of Tokyo study for their daily activities by the gadget. It is because the developed of internet about 5G. As a result, the student prefer to get lesson by surfing the internet
Secondly, I disagree with this statement it is because dating a back the technology not developed since today. Then not all book can read by access the google.
For instance, Arabic Linguistic department of Brawijaya University choose to look for their lesson in the printed books. At the same time, they went to the country such as Cairo to find the origin book. As a result, the printed book is needed rather online book.
To conclude, one day during the new techonolgy the printed book and newspaper will lost in the some country. In contrast, some student got the main lesson by printed book.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kes access the internet without money. I agree with this notion, many person find...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a book' or simply 'books'?
Suggestion: a book; books
...website without paying. However, buying a books is still important due to not all artic...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... role printed books. So, people can see many kind of articles in the smartphone without ...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...lgy the printed book and newspaper will lost in the some country. In contrast, some ...
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ted book and newspaper will lost in the some country. In contrast, some student got ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77307692308 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38695604727 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5191409665 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113563637925 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372874384039 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407759479116 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601220565473 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480477154428 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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