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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: dmacharya
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- These days a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports Why Is it a positive or negative development 78
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- the charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow a city in Scotland in 2010 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 26.3917525773 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 937.175257732 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 355.0 206.0 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93149449737 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 127.690721649 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 290.88556701 201% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.44472379 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.714285714 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258163853119 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892009438936 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697191314894 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176598692475 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357929368125 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 41.2886597938 230% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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