When families have a meal together, it is considered as a social activity. Do you agree that eating together is important to the people of your country.
It is sad but true that not every one has full and happy family so no one can deny that family is a priceless treasure in the world. In modern life, having meal with family members considered as a social activity in view of its mental values. In my view of point, there is no interesting activity which can be compared with family's meal. Compared to developed countries like Western countries and Japan which totally focused on private life and individual work, family's meal plays an important role in my country.
Vietnam is a traditional country upholding ancient values in order to maintain lose attachment in family's members. Vietnameses tend to live in a extended family which consist of many different generations so having meal together becomes habit and custom. In addition to extended family, Vietnam's nuclear family also has the same habit in eating. Difference to developed countries, Vietnameses are teach to have meal together with others member in spite of individual works maybe have seperated time. It becomes a traditional lifestyle of Vietnam people.
I firmly belive that having meal along with family members has more benefits than you can image. First of all, family is a basic standard of society, which deciding stable situation and be a measure to express knowledgeable level of country's population. Obviously, having meal together is a best opportunity to maintain and promote lose attachment with other members. I agree that each person should have personal life and activities but thinking carefully about meaning of life, I realized that there are some moments, some people that if i lost them, i never have ability to find them again although I pay with all my property, happiness,...because they are priceless, they are valuable than any expensive treasure in the world which can be bought by money. Imaging that after a long day hard working, cooking and having meal together is so simple but you can share with family members all your sadness, disappointment. It sad but true that there are plenty of people who just want to have meal with their family one more time but it is in vain. Maybe the distraction them is not an opportunity, it is an infinite distance.
In conclusion, having meal with family members plays an important role in modern life without busy lifestyle. It becomes an unchanged thing in daily day. In my opinion, it is not just a normal meal with people whom we love so much, but it consists of priceless moments which can make me regret for the rest of our lives if we miss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8747099768 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70071200193 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512761020882 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3294024685 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.578947368 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319722557057 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100649276673 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670824591503 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19105793862 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552398742576 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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