Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?
Whether it is outstanding to set some entrance tickets for museums or not is controversial. Although both paying money to enter museums and free entering have their own drawbacks, having some regulations including buying tickets , presumed to be more beneficial. This essay will elaborate on pros and cons of both mentioned ideas.
On the one hand, what makes people hesitate about visiting a place is always the amount of money should be paid. Vast majority of individuals do prefer to visit historical places which do have less entry requirements in comparison with others. Such condition can actually cause less number of visitors due to the money should be spent whereas the great opportunity that it brings, people might not take the great experience they acquire into consideration so they just pay attention to the expense. Thus, if tickets would be essential for all people who want to get into museums, demands for visiting would get cut down.
On the other hand, preventing damages is a golden advantage will gain if people be made to pay for what does values. To be more precise, people do not know how valuable masterpieces are until they pay money for visiting museums, they would always try to take care of all the matters which are being exhibited. To sum up humans always respect to all the objects which seem to be worthy additionally, this would happen when they pay for smallest thing relating to such items.
All in all, some people might just opine paying cost prices seems to be non-essential. Despite all points it would bring if entrances were free the advantages of having ticket entrance available, will outweigh its disadvantages. From my perspective taking care of all objects being kept in museums prioritize over any other factor so this would prompt setting 4 entry cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, thus, whereas, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98349834983 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64083897103 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6600387111 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154590854956 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635697417293 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437826870944 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996637746556 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124186481176 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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