Water pollution on rivers, lakes, and oceans is raising much consideration from conservationists. There are myriads of explanations for the more and more amount of polluted water, however, the most feasible one must be human activities. Water pollution also poses many threats to all living species including both lives of animals and humans, which will be discussed in the essay below.
First and foremost, human activities have severe impacts on water pollution. In the manufacturing industry, the more products have been created, the higher amount of trash and waste is discharged into the environment, especially rivers, lakes, and seas. The most noticeable example is American, one of the most successful industrial countries, which is also one of the countries that have the highest rates of lakes and rivers pollution. Another aspect contributing to the remarkable proportion of water pollution is residential attitudes towards dealing with their garbage. Many people, consisting of tourists and residents, are unaware or imprudent of their terrible action of throwing trash into lakes or rivers. According to the Vietnamese Environment Minister, about 40-50% of the river's pollutants disposed down to the stream are household waste.
Water is one of the most essential substenance for humans and animals, hence, water pollution means the life of all species is disturbed. In the animals' world, many marine animals will perish from consuming and living in water full of pollutants, afterwards, these carcasses will be another pollutant and continue polluting the water. For the animals that live on land, consuming polluted water means they will suffer from various diseases or even face death because of different toxins contained. Otherwise, if they do not drink, they will also die due to dehydration. Similar to animals, if people consume this contaminated water or not, they will be afflicted by many health problems. In addition, without a qualified source of water, many industrial and living activities can not occur, therefore, human society will remain unchanged, in other words, devolution.
In conclusion, human activities take the highest responsibility in polluting the water. The serious consequences not only terribly affect the human community but also the life of all living animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51123595506 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88877147439 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547752808989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6155562833 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.411764706 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243450597172 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08386165348 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047643707644 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151283029092 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269840910757 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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