Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effect does this have people, what are the demerits and what are the job opportunities?
In contemporary settings, more individuals become netizens due to which they prefer online shopping and their priority become proliferate in significant manner. Therefore, this represents numerous positive impacts on masses. Although, this also shows disadvantages, however, this trend provides employee opportunities. Thrice of view points are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, online shopping becomes focal point of current decades. Therefore, there are plenty of web sites which are now available on internet. Due to which, this shows numerous positive impression on public. First and foremost factor is easy availability of things which includes superior quality, wide range variety and affordable expenses. As a result, costomers become completely satisfied. Another factor is preservation of time. Because, individuals order things by single touch at home without travel distances. Thus, their time and money becomes preserve.
On contrast, there are few disadvantages which comes in front of public. First of all, their return and financial policy. Because via e-commerce, if any object become contaminate or of inferior quality which is delivered to costomer. Thus, this creates issue in return policy and there is no guarantee of return of money.
Although, online shop represents demerit. Yet, this provides number of job opportunities to unemployed individuals. Because, this trend proliferates rapidly. Due to which, there is necessity of more number of management officer, delivery boys or such employees, because of rapid production. Therefore, this gives employment to plethora of masses.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, although e-commerce depicts little negative aspects. However, this have numerous positive impressions and affection on masses, moreover, another progression is employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01893939394 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02172792396 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5740685713 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0869565217 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4782608696 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122655976334 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036137867175 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481618203366 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722667805897 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495673326419 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.93 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.45 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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