You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed jobs, describe your new job and tell him/her your other news
Dear Lili,
I am writing to let you know that I have recently started work in a new company. This change is so special and meaningful for me so I would like to tell you about this. I have worked in Viettin Media for three years and have many precious experiences and relationships there. However, I have recognized that I need to find a new environment and explore new things that I have never done before. I would like to try a different field and find new aspects of myself. Therefore, I have decided to change my job. I will come to FPT Telecom company and work at Marketing Department. My job consists of finding potential customers, planning marketing projects, and searching for trends to prepare a lot of events and meetings for my company. One more thing, I forgot to tell you that I bought a new car and move to a flat which nearly my new company. It would be great if you could visit me and we could have dinner together. I am looking forward to hearing new things from you.
Please reply to me as soon as possible. I wait for your letter.
Love
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37878787879 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53755086077 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.584884764 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6923076923 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304821789161 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105275797228 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710101320964 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202701677239 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568333456644 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.