Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the digital age, it is widely acknowledged that technology play an important role in human life and activities. Given their importance, how to use technology as effective as we can to benefit our society has been a much-debated topic. While some people argue that that modern technology is widening the gap between rich and poor people, others disagree with this notion. I side with the former view
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people say that the poor can take advantages of modern devices. Thanks to technology, anyone from any parts of the world can access the Internet, which could turn rags into riches. It is attributable to educational materials and information that might help them develop themselves. For example, nowadays have lots of people from lower and middle class learn how to play the stock market on the Internet and without school training, they have changed their own life and bridge the rich poor gap.
On the other hand, I believe the gap between wealthy and poor people is extended by modern technology. Automation is the most obvious reason when it undermines humans' place with the fact that it could perform tasks that required copious amounts of human labor. As a result, less work opportunities are available for impoverished people. Take United State for instance, low-wage workers are susceptible to job loss and wage depression due to automation. Furthermore, state-of-the-art machinery are costly and not every citizen can afford it. This is a testament to how modern equipment could not narrow the gap between fortunate and unfortunate people.
In conclusion, although modern technological advancements is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, it's also beneficial to the people who is in the lower class.
- Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14137931034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.861447793 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4398321833 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322226495214 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104238253404 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13549476298 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203024003428 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694649121156 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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