Some people consider that children should attend some classes at local companies or other working sectors to have real life experience. What extent do you agree or disagree with the given statement?
It is universally acknowledged that children are leaders of tomorrow. Presently, few masses assert that it is extremely imperative for juveniles to attend some classes at business forms or local companies in order to get a great deal of knowledge and experience of countless field. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement. To commence with, there are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, children can get a wide range of experience, knowledge and become more skilled while attending classes at working sectors and local companies. To illustrate, students who attend classes in business forms can learn to deal with difficult situations and get new ideas, working strategies, tips and tricks by meeting with new and experienced people. As a result, joining local companies or other working sector invites umpteen job job opportunities which contribute remarkably to make their career bright. What is more, children can develop communication skills and confidence as they meet with new individuals by attending classes at local companies.Consequently, joining classes at working sectors is a worthwhile idea for children in order to personal growth. On the other hand, further emphasising on my point of view. Initially, children can develop business skills while attending classes at local companies. To justify, students who attend class at business forms can observe the dealing between employees, customers and businesses. In this way, they learn multiple techniques that how to run business. To recapitulate, undeniably, juveniles feel burden due to their studies. However, I still believe that attending classes at local companies or working sectors is a lucrative idea for students to learn new business skills and communication skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, while, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46376811594 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07787669209 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0989748079 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307812740117 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103027190918 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711280812921 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307812740117 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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