The given diagram demonstrates the designs and mechanics of a hot air balloon.
Overall, It is clear that the envelope covers the largest part of the total hot balloon. Moreover, the diagram also points out that propane is the fuel of this balloon used to produce hot air.
At the bottom of the hot air balloon, the propane tanks are located in the bucket. Then, the mixture of the propane in the cylinders and the air is burned in the burner, producing a flame to heat the air. Next, the envelope is filled up with hot air which leads to the descent of the balloon, since the hot air is lighter than the cool air in the surrounding atmosphere. Besides, ropes are shown connecting the basket section to the skirt of the envelope.
In addition, the enormous envelope with the body made of gores and panels is based upper to the skirt. The parachute valve at the top of it is a self-sealing flap. To adjust and control the height of the flying balloon, the valve is sealed or unsealed to allow the hot air to escape at a controlled rate.
- The picture below shows how a hot balloon works Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 67
- The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age 84
- The picture below shows how a hot balloon works Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, moreover, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37563451777 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38068360142 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497461928934 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.023490803 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119607931069 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551077595231 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465117096415 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916058041123 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311258444907 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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