"“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position."
A number of people believe that their success does completely rely on their hard work which is the arduous process they have done in order to gain the final result. However, I personally think apart from the fact that how hard-working people are, they still could not succeed without any luck. To demonstrate my disagreement, the reasons will be given below.
First and foremost, no one denies that hard work is a must-have factor leading to success. On the contrary, luck, on no account, plays a less crucial role than in that achievement although it only accounts for one percent in total. An interviewee, for example, has prepared his answers for any situations and any questions from the company carefully and thoroughly. However, if he is in bad luck that day, having a severe stomach ache for instance, then he could not manage to overcome the interview and his preparation the night before is all down the drain.
Another reason why I believe luck also takes part in success is due to the fact that luck sometimes shows whether we have the ability of being aware of the advantages that we are having and, thus, making most of it in our project or our work. Numerous chances are being given to us in the present time, both in an obvious way that we can easily take and in the other way which requires cognitive abilities. For example, a number of young people today say that their career in the future will depend on how they are lucky in finding jobs, while the actual luck is their awareness about the importance of study in the present period. Unless they study industriously and thoroughly, they would find it difficult having a stable career later on.
To sum up, I strongly believe that both hard work and luck have a binding relationship on our road to success. Without the other, it is hard for us to gain an achievement and the best result. Therefore, apart from studying hard, we should take into account luck as another necessary element to our success as well.
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- When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 61
- When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an obvious way" with adverb for "obvious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g given to us in the present time, both in an obvious way that we can easily take and in the othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48427544564 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4463748419 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129670831976 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506231891161 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412598567563 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925660303256 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388101555186 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.