The graph below shows the population of a particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of citizens by age range of a specific nation from 1960 to the predicted year 2040.
Overall, it is clear that even though the group of 65+-year-old residents has the tendency to increase remarkably, the number of people aged 15-64 still dominate the proportion of citizens.
In 1960, there were approximately 55% people of the age 15-64 in the land, while it was 30% for group 0-14 and nearly 25% for the 65+ one. Within the next 30 years, the figure of people from 0-14 years old significantly fell by 15%. By contrast, residents of the age 65+ seemingly went up a bit more 5%. At the same time, the group of 15-64-year-old citizens fluctuated slightly over 55%.
There was a time around the year 1990 when citizens of the age range 15-64 and 65+ were equal at the percentage of 20. From 1990 to 2020, the figure of people of the age 65+ had an intensive growth while the other two faintly fell off. From 2020 onward, as the projection, the number of 65+-year-old citizens will keep growing and it will reach the highest position at the end of the period at 45% where it will meet the 15-64 age group, which will still go down. Meanwhile, people from 0-14 years old will lessen steadily and reach the lowest point at 10%.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56768558952 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48066453499 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4242393583 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902816452808 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444725891883 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328915982885 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729451002399 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317640630915 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.