The map below show the centre of a small town it is Islip as it is now, and plans for it development
At this time,The main road between many shop and the school and park at the west and east of them. In the development planned.there are a lot of roads so the traffic are better, place for predestrian make it more harder to have accident and that way are nearly many shop or bus station so it make you can go jogging, shopping at the same time. much of housing near some small shop so it very comfortable if you lack of something in your house. The weakness of the planned is the school are so far so it hard when the school have some accident like fire.
In conclusion: the planned are nearly perfectly for a old and not modern town so people at there can happy for this planned
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...d plans for it development At this time,The main road between many shop and the sch...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun shop seems to be countable; consider using: 'many shops'.
Suggestion: many shops
...ent At this time,The main road between many shop and the school and park at the west and...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
...e better, place for predestrian make it more harder to have accident and that way are nearl...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun shop seems to be countable; consider using: 'many shops'.
Suggestion: many shops
...o have accident and that way are nearly many shop or bus station so it make you can go jo...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...e nearly many shop or bus station so it make you can go jogging, shopping at the sam...
^^^^
Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Much
... go jogging, shopping at the same time. much of housing near some small shop so it v...
^^^^
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n: the planned are nearly perfectly for a old and not modern town so people at th...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15131578947 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28643741498 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9596348303 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.2 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206986251116 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115907864178 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106591061217 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256701627763 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218439271371 0.0819641961636 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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