You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice
In today's world, people's definition of success has been changed a lot. Some are of the opinion that having a bigger house and modern cars will define their degree of success. When it comes to running a business or buying a house, people are divided into two groups. Some think that buying a house for their family will provide them with a better condition to live in, while others prefer to run their own business but live in a smaller house. I agree with the latter, and I like owning a business, and I have three compelling reasons which I will explore in the coming essay.
First of all, we all as humans have the functionality to get used to the place where we live. In my opinion, the difference between a large and small house is in the number of things we have space for. The bigger the house, the more things we can have in our houses. Humans have always greed to have more possessions, but we should stop this attitude somewhere because our planet does not have unlimited space and resources. We should try new minimalism trends and get used to buying things when we actually need them. By doing in this manner, we will be able to live in a smaller house and invest our money in other businesses which can be productive for our society.
Secondly, when we start a business, we can serve our society as well. The unemployment rate has always been a challenge for governors; when we start our business, we hire some people to help us run the business, which means we are helping authorities tackle this challenge. Surveys results show that people tend to do fewer criminal and illegal activities in countries with a lower unemployment rate. The result of having successful businesses in a country would be a healthier and more productive society.
Finally, Starting a business will help us use the knowledge we have acquired through the academic years. We can use all the methods and technics that we have learned and fulfill our entrepreneurial spirit. Not only does running a business let us use our knowledge, but also it allows us to develop our creativity.
To wrap it up, running a business would be a win-win option, which benefits both the business owner and society. If I had a chance to choose between a house and running a business, I would absolutely choose to run my own business.
- TPO54 task 1 76
- TPO11 80
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- tpo6 integrated task 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61313868613 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5590393745 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489051094891 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5214064024 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148139087042 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548001920814 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371475503973 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945941742656 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399305186125 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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