Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
It is a known fact that private businesses are the quintessential of free market and despite the size can contribute a lot to the nation’s economy and community’s wellbeing. While the modern western societies rely on the “invisible hand” to regulate the market dynamics, such as demand and supply, in order for small businesses to thrive sometimes more than a minimal intervention of the government is needed.
To start with, government must make sure that there is a breeding ground for entrepreneurial spirit to merge and burgeon in first place. This can be achieved by putting in place respective regulations and mechanisms in place. No matter how many small and medium companies are there in the market, the number of giant monopolies are always existent. To be able to compete with bargaining powers of big brands and to get small businesses started and sustain, government shall provide legal regulations to prevent cartels, oligopolies, setting prices superficially and so on. By these “check and balance” measures governments provide equal starting opportunities for small businesses, eliminate superficial barriers to enter markets and overall keep healthy environment for economic growth.
Once auspicious environment for small businesses to get started are provided, government should make sure that small businesses are capable to thrive. The capacity and financial shortages of small businesses are limited, so the support of government is crucial. For example, in 2015 Azerbaijanian government launched a Scheme for funding start-ups and providing sponsors for tech start-ups. The huge a-la Silicon Valley lab was established in cooperation with National Academy of Advanced Technologies, so potential entrepreneurs can benefit from resources, facilities and expertise of professionals. The government eventually took it even further, by announcing a tax relief program for all tech start-ups, committing to support and develop their long-turn development.
Surely, government should not make long-term commitments, but taking measures to support private busineeses at their pre-mature or conceiving stage is necessary. The government shall, first, provide healthy market and equal opportunities for entrepreneurial endeavours of private businesses in the market, second, enable newly formed small businesses until they can walk firmly on their own feet.
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- Claim In order to help small businesses thrive government should play a minimal role in private business matters Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be s 66
- Claim In order to help small businesses thrive government should play a minimal role in private business matters Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be s 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'thrive'.
Suggestion: sometimes thrive
...upply, in order for small businesses to thrive sometimes more than a minimal intervention of the...
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Line 2, column 788, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ealthy environment for economic growth. Once auspicious environment for small bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, well, while, for example, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75920679887 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19281176691 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597733711048 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4730858229 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.214285714 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196059856037 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766997926641 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524084402487 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130082481996 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015611714478 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.1639044944 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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