The given maps show the differences between the costal side resort of Templeton in 1990 and 2005.
Overall, there was a lot of noticable changes that shown the devolopment of the resort such as: the construction of ferry, factory,...etc.
In 1995, the Templeton seemed to be less devoloped, the trees covered a large area while the housing areas located in the west and the east was the place the public buildings like railway station, school, hospital located.
By 2005, a huge amount of trees have been chopped down to make way for new buldings such as a new supermarket in the west, the new airport has been erected in the far site of the resort to the north as well as a factory which has been built near the railway in the east site, a ferry was also be provided as a new approach to arrive the resort while the housing in the Templeton have almost converted in the apartments rather than houses.
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- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...h as: the construction of ferry, factory,...etc. In 1995, the Templeton seemed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60122699387 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49995295225 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.647968082 43.030603864 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.5 112.824112599 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 22.9334400587 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23284499171 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15808589843 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139227268052 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15808589843 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139227268052 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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