Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with this statement

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , many
...gly disagree with this statement because,many people think that luck doesnt play any ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ent because,many people think that luck doesnt play any role in peoples success,while ...
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Suggestion: , while
... doesnt play any role in peoples success,while i believe that luck plays the key role ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... play any role in peoples success,while i believe that luck plays the key role in...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...believe that luck plays the key role in ones success.Luck is often the final factor ...
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Suggestion: Luck
...luck plays the key role in ones success.Luck is often the final factor that turns ye...
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Suggestion: Many
...layed an important role in their career.Many inventions and ideas were created thank...
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Suggestion: It
...s and ideas were created thanks to luck.It is believed that Isaac Newton was sitti...
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Suggestion: Consequently
...ee and an apple fell on top of his head.Consequently,it made him understand that the force t...
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...ple fell on top of his head.Consequently,it made him understand that the force that...
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Suggestion: This
...itational attraction force of the Earth.This lucky situation made Newton a very succ...
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Suggestion: For
...ies and music artists become successful.For example,movie stars.Yes,they work hard,...
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Suggestion: , movie
...ic artists become successful.For example,movie stars.Yes,they work hard,take acting cl...
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Suggestion: Yes
...come successful.For example,movie stars.Yes,they work hard,take acting classes,live...
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Suggestion: , they
...e successful.For example,movie stars.Yes,they work hard,take acting classes,live in p...
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...r example,movie stars.Yes,they work hard,take acting classes,live in poor ,however on...
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Suggestion: , live
...s.Yes,they work hard,take acting classes,live in poor ,however once they get a chance...
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Suggestion: ,
...rk hard,take acting classes,live in poor ,however once they get a chance to show o...
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Suggestion: , they
...in a movie even not in an important role,they still can attract big producers or scen...
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...ts attention by their play. In addition,many people get their dream jobs because of ...
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Suggestion: They
...le get their dream jobs because of luck.They can work hard and diligently,but withou...
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , but
...f luck.They can work hard and diligently,but without little luck they cant get highe...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...diligently,but without little luck they cant get higher and higher income.Most of my...
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Suggestion: Most
... they cant get higher and higher income.Most of my acquaintances found job because t...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , i
...an offer them a good job. In conclusion,i believe that luck plays the key role in...
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Suggestion: I
...n offer them a good job. In conclusion,i believe that luck plays the key role in...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...believe that luck plays the key role in ones success,however working hard is also ve...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , however
... luck plays the key role in ones success,however working hard is also very important,bec...
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Suggestion: , because
...ever working hard is also very important,because if one of these factors is missed,succe...
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Suggestion: , success
...ecause if one of these factors is missed,success is impossible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25514403292 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25589051494 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.928324576 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.4 100.406767564 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6 20.6045352989 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.45110844103 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145207538401 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891450507352 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085975206299 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891450507352 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085975206299 0.0645574589148 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 11.7677419355 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 58.1214874552 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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