Schools should prepare students for university, rather than for work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Recently, the phenomenon ofuniversity and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although
contested by many that the matter of learning is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both
constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that teaching can be a
plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint,work can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the
fact that merits, as well as advantages of costing, are crucial. According to my own experience, I performed an
academic experiment which discovered the importance of working hard. Thus, beneficial ramifications of n5 are
visible.
Within the realm of science, university and work can provide the community with negative impacts that are related to this
reality that the demerits of teaching are remarkable. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken
by a prestigious university has described the role of pay many. Hence, predicted outcomes of create family are noticeable.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the
benefits of school far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of teacher prove the significance of students,
but also pinpoint possible implication
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , work
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6038647343 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19393460037 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671497584541 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5510529709 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.454545455 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105463103585 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312012370644 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342665245823 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0304339888253 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414625653562 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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