People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Folks who migrate to a new country are advised to remain their identities, while others suppose that migrants need to adapt to the new customs, as well as traditions of the new nation they come to. In my opinion, I totally agree with the last statement that individuals should follow a new lifestyle when coming to a country.
First of all, integrating into a new culture is likely to benefit immigrants in terms of daily life. A new country certainly has different traditions and customs from their own nation, so it is a must that they need to follow new lifestyle in order to be closer with the local residents. For an instant, learning the language of the country I travel will help me a lot to make conversations or even small talks with the native. Wearing similar styles of clothes or eating the same kinds of foods are not likely to make immigrants extraordinary or awkward, verse visa, quickly get along with their neighbors. Overall, those can make immigrants' lives more peaceful.
Second, people following new customs in a new country they live in is considered as a chance to learn new cultures. They have opportunity to experient directly intriguing traditions and get an insightfulness into the new customs. By living in the local community, they seem to be naturally absorbed unique identities of that country, as a result, they broaden their horizons.
On the other hand, immigrants, though, are advised to adapt to a new culture, they can not forget their own customs and traditions. Only after do they love and respect their own culture, they can learn another one from another nation.
To sum up, it is necessary for people to follow the new customs and traditions when coming to a new country because of many benefits. However, it is must that they also remember their own culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4020979021 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00005908951 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5939228898 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22369296795 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688647448932 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599470609932 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113027216398 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389721927881 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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