The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Social media has deeply infiltrated into everyone's life and is believed to be replacing our face-to-face interaction . This situation , although advantageous in certain aspects , is generally a detriment to true human communication in the long run.
On the one hand , there are a number of benefits from using social networks to communicate . Firstly , they facilitate communication in the modern times as now people can globally connect with old friends and relatives or with others who share common interests . For example , Facebook is currently providing service for 2.4 billion users who can choose to connect and interact with anyone they want, regardless of where they are . Secondly , study sessions are frequently happening on social networking websites through live streaming services . Therefore , learners around the world now can have free access to online classes on such sites.
On the other hand , the disadvantages of social media replacing face-to-face interaction are much more concerning . As these sites are becoming more and more dominant and attract large numbers of new users every day , people can fall prey to online communication abuse , such as online bullying and harassment . In fact , social networking websites can become a toxic environment where users can be verbally assaulted because there are only a few rules , most of which are spoken rules rather than established guidelines , that restrict hateful or abusive contents . Furthermore , overuse of social media to communicate can lead to people downplaying the importance of face-to-face interaction on which true human relationships thrive . Nowadays , many young and reclusive users prefer living in a virtual world on social sites than engaging in real-life relationships . This may have serious mental effects , such as increased stress , anxiety and loneliness .
In conclusion , the downsides of social media replacing face-to-face interaction are more significant than the benefits users could reap from those sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62666666667 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06230965328 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2665857306 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280797682888 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108098461357 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127389733846 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19697546392 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803065061602 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.