It is generally considered that news plays crucial role of most individuals lives. The main vital role of the news due to knowledge level increase and get the right decision for their family.
To begin with, news is the essential for the masses they grow up knowledge in any field. To elaborate it , when they see the news on the internet, television, you tube, google and on the news channel they acquire the knowledge in any related of field. They can merge their own views in any information.They can increase the level of thinking. For instance, a survey was conducted by the Japan university found in the 2016 that they were intelligent in the political field and selected the right president of them. As a result, they can lives their life easily and successfully with the knowledge.
Furthermore, humans can get the right decision in the future for their family. To explain it, many of times people have no right knowledge to take decision for them and their family. when the see the good news rather than bad news they can diverse their mind in the good things and take a good decision. Moreover, they can make the bright future of their kids. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that numerous American society watched the business news and implement on their business and they were success 90 percent in their given goals by the employer. Hence, they are wealthy person and giving the good lifestyle to their loves one.
In conclusion, news essential for the all human being owing to they get more information in any field and they can provide good life to their family with the good decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: They
...erge their own views in any information.They can increase the level of thinking. For...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...resident of them. As a result, they can lives their life easily and successfully with...
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Suggestion: When
...ake decision for them and their family. when the see the good news rather than bad n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thy person and giving the good lifestyle to their loves one. In conclusion, ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81468531469 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52025027051 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.428824362 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195967573639 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869808972393 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894831240046 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150017710358 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390775068417 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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