One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that the class buildings are replaced by online lectures. There is wide spread worry that it would lead myriad of concern in one's life.In my opinion this apprehension is warranted and should be accepted.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that halls are the traditional way of teaching students.The kinder garten children like to go in halls for learning in rooms.It cannot only contribute to conserve culture,but leads to numerous other benefits in various feilds.Thanks, to the wide range of advantages it offers,public can enhance the quality and productivity with much ease,efficacy and convenience.Needless to say,all these merits stand good at one's stead as far as augmenting the chances of excellence and prosperity is concerned.
Futhermore,another pivotal aspect of this aforementioned preposition is likely to help excel and thrive in varied areas.Besides, the halls provide the enviornment to the children for study purpose. To elaborate it, the pupils learns the sharing manner and other things which are important for survival in society. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in May 2012 and March 2016 clearly indicate that the classrooms are curical and critical for the development of nation.
On the other hand, the section of society contradicts the above-said view.They pondered that the online study is more compulsary for the children in this modern epoch and if they donot know how to manage the things in techincal way the donot get proper way of learning.It makes the juvenilles techno-savvy. Therefore,it is clear that why some are in favour of my view point.
To conclude that having pondered over it is crystal clear that the cultural way of learning as comprable to new learning methods are indeed to great dire to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19496855346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11796219098 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.182682138 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.2 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990832700648 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371638066528 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455343470121 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563513627627 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314003148103 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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