The provided bar graph illustrate the information about the percentum of individuals whose age 60-64 and who were employed in Balgium, Japan, USA and Indonesia between 1970 to 2000.
Overall, it can be seen clearly that the maximum masses employed in USA and Indonesia as conpared to others, whereas least number in Balgium.
Having a glance, in 1970, the percentile of 60-64 age group men and women was 79% and 60% respectively in Balgium but there was a tad decrease observed in the numbers of masses in 2000. However, there was negligible difference in the percentum of men in USA during 1970 to 2000, while the women percentage was decreased by 40% in 2000.
Furthermore, in 1970, the number of men and women who were employed in Japan range between 79% to 59%. By contrast, there was drastic decrease in the percentile of individuals, it was accounted 59% men and 49% women, while in last country the amount of people hovered around 81% and 62% in 1970 and 71% and 50% during 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75722543353 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59962703936 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5455279183 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245346443391 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136098504652 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749732384883 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152961191872 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861412883589 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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