Parents are considered as a real support for their counterparts. It is believed that the guardians should teach them the importance of sports rather than focusing much on studies. In my opinion, both aspects are important for the holistic development of a child.
On the one hand, physical movement is imperative in order to have a healthy life ahead. In this sedentary lifestyle, children are less active and often engage in indoor games only rather than playing outside. It would result in compromised health and a weak immune system. Additionally, sports teaches several essential life skills, such as being competitive, having cooperation and team spirit which shapes them to become a better individual. That is why, the more parents encourage their children to engage in sports, the better equipped their future will be.
On the other hand, the significance of academics is indispensable. Primarily, because it helps to shape our future, it is important to take studies seriously. If parents would make children spend less time on studies, they would think that education is less important in life and more likely to affect their performance. In order to get enrolled in top universities and have a promising and secure future, the children have to work really hard in academics. Hence, without qualification, one can not become a successful person in life.
In conclusion, although paying attention to health is crucial, parents cannot ignore the importance of education and in no sense they can make it second priority. According to me, caregivers should follow a balanced approach to make them understand the criticality of both aspects for mental and physical development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...sense they can make it second priority. According to me, caregivers should follow a balanced ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, second, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28518518519 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90982206877 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1420097583 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163470644469 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445187457216 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557907383194 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863513872837 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423802574893 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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