Traditional Yemeni Wedding
Do you know how Yemeni people celebrate their weddings? All people around the world celebrate wedding parties, and they give the groom and the bride their best days during this party. In addition, they let them wear delighting and beautiful clothes either traditional or modern. Each one of them has his own customs and traditions. As an example, here in Yemen, we have three main steps to celebrate weddings, and they are the engagement, the wedding vows, and the wedding party.
In the beginning, the engagement is the key that opens the gate of the wedding. First, the female relatives of the young man go and visit the girl's house, and they look at her. Then they get back to the man and describe her. Eventually, if he agrees to marry her, they propose the girl to the young man. If the opposite happens, they don't go and propose her.
The second step is the wedding vows in which the young man and the girl become illegally married couple. After the man pays the money for the girl, they call a sheikh to make the wedding vows; by giving some Islamic pieces of advice, motivating young men to marry, and telling the young man and the girl's father or her sponsor what to say.
The last and the longest step is the wedding party. We do a lot of things and have much fun. For example, few days before the wedding party, we invite people whom we know, and in the wedding day, we welcome them. Beside, we bring and prepare a big feast with meat for the guests. Afternoon, we go dancing in our traditional way like Zerbady dance and Pitaiq dance. Moreover, we make a night musical party, and we bring a singer, or we make a comedian play. Sometimes we make a party before the wedding day that we call "Sharih".
To conclude, ways of wedding parties are different all over the world. Sometimes they depend on people's ancestries, customs, or religions. Furthermore, wedding is the start point of eternal happy life. No matter how different are the ways, what matters is how they enjoy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57703081232 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39799142831 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.51434878587 594% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3931278971 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0434782609 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5217391304 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224188508892 0.272083759551 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617535724597 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690528804011 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115006151449 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872449352548 0.0443174109184 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.3589403974 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.8541721854 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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