The diagram gives data about the consumption between two countries France and the UK on four groups of commodities namely cars, computers, books, perfume, cameras had been purchased in 2010, measured in pounds sterling.
It is apparently seen that the UK spent more than 450,000 pounds sterling on car consumption, which became the greatest amount of currency, and over 400,000 pounds sterling in books consumption, while it just stopped at 400,000 and 300,000 pounds sterling in France, respectively. However, the quantity of spending money was bigger than any other groups that the French customer had spent on. Remarkably, purchasers in the UK seemed to be fond of photography through the price of buying cameras with around 350,000 pounds sterling at the same time as purchasers in France only cost 150,000 pounds sterling.
Nonetheless, French cost about 375,000 pounds on buying computers which are more than the other country approximately 25,000 pounds. Furthermore, the UK cost quite less money of fragrance, which was nearly 150,000 pounds sterling, meanwhile France cost 200,000 of buying the same category of product.
In general, the more significant expenditures belonged to the UK, which also had both the biggest and the smallest disbursements precisely spending on cars and perfume, respectively.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: cindycornelia98
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48529411765 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82313365282 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8764443523 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.857142857 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0455001624879 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275203578524 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038685192483 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437383036584 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419754047046 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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