Life is complex and full of different risky challenges, so in order to live it at its maximum, in my view, we should take risks and jump into adventures . The bases for my view are personal and philosophical.
First, often adventures can lead to a lot of happy moments, valuable memories or a myriad of positive feelings. Additionally, one can benefit a lot from taking risks because it can open a lot of opportunities as only the bravest ones get the best. For example , when I was in my childhood I loved fashion and in my town was an fashion runway dedicated for children , i wanted to go very much but my mom thought it can affect negatively my thinking. I went without her knowing and discovered what an interesting and fascinating domain was fashion . That risky decision made me who I am today and opened my eyes when speaking about dreams .
Second, even if one's fear becomes real and it turns out as a disaster, that person can learn a lot from it or get some life experience . Mistakes lead to knowledge.
Finally, from a philosophical standpoint, 70% of people regret more about the things they did not do because of anxiety or fear than about the things they did and turned out bad.Therefore, in order not to live a boring, repetitive, and usual life and in order not to regret the missed opportunities , we should take the best from our lives and live it as fuller as we can .
Glancing back at everything mentioned before, one can gain tremendously by taking risks and joining daily adventures , hence making our world a delightful place to live in without the fear of mistakes .
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Akbar Sabetkar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, for example, speaking about, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61130742049 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78322152021 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0733748979 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941321435303 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310137183752 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341507821457 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554878932993 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278093771196 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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