The bar chart shows the number of heat-related illnesses suffered by high school students per 100.000 sports events in central US State. The line graph shows the average temperatures for one year in a central US State.
The two given bar charts reveal information about the proportion of heat-related illnesses caught by high school students per 100000 sports events n central US states and the temperatures on average in Wichita, Kansas for one year.
From an overall perspective, the figure for heat-related illnesses which high school students suffered from constituted the biggest in August. What stands out from the second chart is that the average temperature hit a peak in July. Whereas, at the bottom of the second chart is in January.
Considering the first chart, the percentage of illnesses reaches the highest point, at about 67%. On the contrary, they merely contribute more than 10% in September and the remaining of them make up a tiny percentage, are under 5%.
With regard to the second bar chart, the two different mentioned lines including the high and low temperature reach a peak in July, is 91% and 70% respectively. Last but not least, in this order, the lines have the lowest proportion in January, nearly 40% and 20%.
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- The bar chart shows the number of heat related illnesses suffered by high school students per 100000 sports events in Central US State The line graph shows the average temperarures for one year in a US State 78
- The bar chart shows the number of heat related illnesses suffered by high school students per 100 000 sports events in central US State The line graph shows the average temperatures for one year in a central US State 82
- The bar chart shows the number of heat related illnesses suffered by high school students per 100 000 sports events in central US State The line graph shows the average temperatures for one year in a central US State 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...average temperature hit a peak in July. Whereas, at the bottom of the second chart is i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, whereas, as for, on the contrary, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04678362573 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77181878525 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9799959984 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352307983989 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122842531994 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155310971528 0.0843802449381 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202927903957 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184807114366 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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