It is widely acknowledged that many developing countries are increasing life expectancy dramatically. This essay will demonstrate some of the main problems of this before outlining a number of viable solutions to mitigate the situation.
It is evident that the growing population of elderly people can have negative impacts on citizens and governments. One of the first problems due to increased life expectancy is that it increases the number of retired people who will receive a pension. Although older people do not need to work, they still receive a considerable amount of money from the government. The government has to devote a large budget to pay their pensions and this can affect the economy of the country. Another problem facing a country with increasing life expectancy is the increasing demand for health care. Elderly people are more susceptible to chronic diseases, such as heart disease or diabetes. These diseases require special medical treatment to be effective. Thus, they have to pay a large amount of money for medical treatment.
Many feasible solutions can be implemented to remedy the aforementioned issues. Firstly, the government should increase retirement age to reduce pressure on the government pension fund. For instance, if the retirement age is increased to five years, elderly can accumulate more money to take care of themselves without depending on pension fund of the government. Another measure would be to medical development. Medical advances and health programmes might allow elderly people to stay healthy and work for longer. Besides that, governments could also encourage immigration in order to increase the number of younger adults.
To sum up, it is clear that the increase in life expectancy is the main cause of some serious problems in developing countries. Nevertheless, this issue can be resolved by the proposed solutions.
- In some countries more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college University or even after finding a job Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 61
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39189189189 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93830368767 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9237714663 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298641435306 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878663856853 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701323030716 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197653322474 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436111182969 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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