Society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
Advertisements have gained significant prominence in recent years. Opinions are divided on the benefits of that marketing tool. While some reckon that such useless and detrimental promotion should be prohibited in all forms, I believe that those pieces of information are not adverse as well as pointless and they could even do harm to society if be banned
There are several reasons why I do not agree with the statement that commercials are harmful and futile. In fact, advertising nowadays contains entertainment value and is capable of entertaining audiences. To provide information more interestingly, advertisers create some short videos with engaging content and ear-catching songs instead of promoting through traditional printed newspapers. This functions as entertainment and marketing tools at the same time if those pieces of advertisement can go viral. Besides, considering the benefits that companies would reap, advertising helps businesses survive and develop in a competitive market. This could pave the way for economic development in the future
On the other hand, it would be damaging for humanity if advertising is forbidden. Admittedly, commercials tend to be exaggerated and more gripping than reality. However, it is only because they want to reach more potential customers as well as notify people about their products. It is up to individuals' demand to decide if they will buy or not. Moreover, if advertising does not exist, social members would miss those convenient items. Doubtless, this trend would associate with the rise of stress in one's life. In addition, advertising is a good business strategy that familiarizes customers with newly-launched products. Such unapproachable products will make their enterprises likely to go unnoticed or even bankrupt in a crowded market.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I would argue that a total ban on advertising would exert negative effects on the community because it serves many useful purposes and does not harm anybody.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49196141479 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11896774621 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.298048588 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268862565632 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667696821131 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569218434614 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160746597239 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415914228051 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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