Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Letterly, there is a common argument about traditional culture in many societies. Customs and traditions are significant in people's lives, but we don't have to use them regularly. The first side believes that it is necessary to keep a conventional way in their life In an otherwise, think that now people not interested in preserving the traditional culture.
Some people until now they live their lives in a classic hard ordinary way furthermore, they trust that this is which make them characterized. Actually, it is a magnificent belief but they will face many difficulties when they want to achieve progress. For example, in some Turkish village handmade carpets is a social meme, and to make one carpet needs to work hard for a long time to get final amazing results. they think it is an indelible wonderful treasure that makes them keep moving on their way.
In addition to that, some people think new generations don't care about looking after their countries culture value and it will start to disappear because of them behave. Maybe they think like that because the other generations don't follow the rules to achieve what they want. nowadays people have many ways to know and learn anything so it isn't important to comply with traditional methods. For instance, if all people surrounding the world contemplate with a similar technique we will not have any creativity or variety in life.
In conclusion, people have to learn how to create a balance between keeping their identification and improving their mindset which makes them understand each other. consequently, they will cooperate to develop their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10112359551 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77910697764 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1418965522 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26983802237 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100067257647 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759744920498 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180981505187 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100165710713 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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