It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?
A new trend of taking a year gap in the midst of completing school and enrolling into higher studies. In my perspective, it have a number of pros and cons. My opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with the merits,it can be seen that there is a basketful of causative factors that make students’ life bed of roses. It aids to refresh their mind from study pressure as a result in regain their energy which motivates them with a positive vibe and triggers them to move forward in their life with a positive attitude. Moving further, pupils can utilize this term to find subjects of interest by doing research on it. A survey has revealed that youngsters who get a year gap usually start studying with a good mood and get higher grades.
On the other hand, there is ample evidence show that a time off also brings drawbacks. One potential bane is poor performance at the early stage of teenagers in school because of a long period without brain’s dormantion. Seriously, the young give into peer pressure and join bad gangs that lead to havoc to society. To exemplify, an idle teenager can begin indulging in practices like cigarette smoking within this term, also can get involved with hard drugs.
In conclusion, break time comprises banes and boons. Even though having recreational time makes teens remove the stress and learning favorite subjects; however, it boots the crime of teenagers.
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university What are the advantages and disadvantages of it 11
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university What are the advantages and disadvantages of it 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90983606557 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62353989287 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668032786885 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5132749082 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1538461538 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0631847914019 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223728291007 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272032255988 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0405010543864 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268329130227 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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