Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some professional players have higher revenue than experts in other fields. Some people think that it is reasonable while others believe that it is totally unfair. In my opinion, it is somewhat justified.
On the one hand, Professional players have some restrictions by virtue of their popularity. They barely can go to a restaurant with their family and spend a quality time with them without any distraction. Fans would recognize them and ask their favorite player an autograph or photo which would interrupt their privacy. On the minus side, beside opponents, there are always proponents who struggle to harm them or blemish their reputation. Therefore, these players should be careful about how their behavior or where they are seen because their opponents would publish fake news based on these information. In addition, athletes can do sports up to almost 40 and they would retired sooner than workers in other jobs. This factor will put their lives in danger because there is possibility that they cannot afford themselves afterward.
On the other hand, being a professional athlete is as hard as being a senior in other professions. Based on the time must be spent for being profession, this amount of difference in salary would be unfair. The society needs different talented people in various fields and there is not a cogent evidence that being a player is more important than being an engineer who work for a consultant company.
In conclusion, being a professional player has its own disadvantages compared to others. In my opinion, top players should earn more because of mentioned reasons but the difference should not be very much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 588, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...onents would publish fake news based on these information. In addition, athletes can do sports up...
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Line 2, column 674, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'retire'
Suggestion: retire
...o sports up to almost 40 and they would retired sooner than workers in other jobs. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09225092251 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73130539102 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3310678864 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186610707371 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754761909146 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871860763098 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145166139685 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108996920467 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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