People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can
be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
There has been an increase in the consumption of sugar-based drinks. I believe that there are some clear reasons behind this situation and also, there are some measures to reduce sugary drink consumption.
The first reason is that commericial advertisements on soft drink is so popular that almost everyone knows about this type of drink. Consequently, marketing people receive much more revenue and invest again in commercial advertising. Secondly, I believe that the producers of many sugary drink produce products which make people feel good when they drink them. Another reason is that people might not know about that soft drink definitely have bad effect on their health. However, I would argue that some people keep consuming without considering the profound impact of sugar-based drink on their body.
There are some steps to take to reduce sugary drink consumption. The first method is that national and local authorities should adopt policies to curb the process of producing more and more soft drink. Moreover, to some unhealthy drink should not be consumed, imposing a official ban on those drinks might be an effective measure. The next solution is that people who understand obviously about the serious influence of sugar-based drink on body’s health should frequently share this helpful information to people around them.
Taking everything into consideration, I agree that there are subjective and objective reasons why people are increasing more and more the consumption of sugar-based drink. Nevertheless, there are also some effective measures to adopt to make people consume less and less sugary drink.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... drink should not be consumed, imposing a official ban on those drinks might be a...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ere are also some effective measures to adopt to make people consume less and less sugar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39215686275 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74169537011 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6124785105 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482838016386 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178176237525 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730447413575 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32035208593 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809868974336 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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