It is sometimes said that people should change career at least once in their life, rather than doing the same kind of job all their working life. Do you agree or disagree?
Most people should consider changing career at least once and not do same one job all their life. I agree that people should change their career once in their life. My essay will discuss further on why I support this saying in the following paragraphs.
First of all, everybody needs new challenges in life. This is a good way to gain new knowledge and skill. Even if a person is content in his job, and the company, after a few years it will become daily routine. For example, my father worked as a teacher in my school all his life, he lived the same life everyday with no change and was bored many times. So, making changes can be useful to pick up new skills and new experience is helpful.
Secondly, for most people values change over time. A job is also like a relationship, one can grow in different direction. Also, what made an individual happy at 22 might not make him happy at 40. Stating from my experience, I changed my career from working in a restaurant in India to driving in Canada, this has helped me gain at lot of insight to life here for me. People mature, taste changes and the process to find what you really like starts at some point for everybody. Hence, people may grow out of doing a type of job and look at new careers.
To conclude, I repeat my opinion that career change has many benefits for most people and hence should try to change career at some point in life rather than sticking to the same job for an entire lifetime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ol all his life, he lived the same life everyday with no change and was bored many times...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w skills and new experience is helpful. Secondly, for most people values change ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37132352941 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26157334443 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7079194451 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42585403216 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146786109783 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17351804004 0.0667982634062 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284767325629 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15631673919 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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