Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In 21th century, modren society has been developed and given an access to almost everything thanks to the growth of technology. However, I firmly believe that it's a double-edged sword when we take our concerns on using technology in distance working and schooling. This essay will address reasons for my view as a follow.
On the one hand, there are a variety of advocates inclined towards the fact that technology can bring many benefits to human’s life. Firstly, it’s both affordable and safe for people to own any devices such as smartphones laptops and tablets. from my perspective, parents are willing to pay for technology devices and internet to get access to their children's online classes in the respiratory pandemic in order to protect their families. Secondly, distant working and home schooling have become more popular among residents over the past two years. It is not only accounts for people's safety but also the convienient and accessible to most resources on the internet.
On the other hand, the modern technology itself still have various drawbacks people should be aware of. The first reason is that long-time working on a phone or laptop can hurt our visions, especially children's eyes. For example, research recently showed that nearly 50% children in Vietnam got their eyes division worsen through studying online during covid-19 which is 3 times higher than before the pandemic. The second reason is that spending too much time on technology devices and internet may make people tired and slow down their actions and thoughts. Over 75% teachers in my school complained about the performance of students these days are really not as good as their previous classes who took offline lessons.
In conclusion although the use of technology is beneficial with affordable price and access to almost everything, I believe people should take precautions while using it to not only get the true advantages from it but also keep ourselves safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: From
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1308411215 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62055067451 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644859813084 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2974297599 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.642857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189366446135 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578483037234 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367101373745 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104699928073 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444662940053 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.