Social media, such as Facebook, Twitter are replacing face to face contact in this century
Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages ?
It is quite common today that face-to-face contact is being replaced by several platforms, such as facebook, Twitter. In my opinion, this situation has surely carried along with it both merits and demerits.
Obvioously, social media offer several positive effects for online meeting. With the assistance of online platforms, people are available to interact with others easily since they do no need to worry about the distance or the time. In other words. users who want to have an online meeting just need a technology device which can connect with the internet. For instance, an American man only spend five minutes calling his friend,, who lives in Vietnam. He do not need to travel for a long distance to have a face-to-face meeting.
While there are certainly positive points to the issue, the inconveniences it has brought about shoul not be overlooked, One major problem is that people nowadays tend to spend more time on surfing the social platforms than meeting face-to-face with others. There are several things, such as: video games, music, films which may be the factors that make people bother their real relationships. Another problem is that some rural areas have the low quality of internet, which do not allow them to interact with other ralatives, who love far from them.
In conclusion, social media does affect the contacts of people in many ways. However, I believe that the upsides of this development far outweight the drawbacks. Therefore, it should be widely promoted
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Users
...e distance or the time. In other words. users who want to have an online meeting just...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...ly spend five minutes calling his friend,, who lives in Vietnam. He do not need to...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...g his friend,, who lives in Vietnam. He do not need to travel for a long distance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11382113821 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60643610215 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7572705043 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221663575345 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723817786366 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867873589754 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150984257501 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863482556804 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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