Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports are an essential part of Individual development because they help us enhance our skillset both physically and mentally. However some people argue that physical strength is vital for success in sports while others opine that mental strength is important. This essay will discuss both opinions.
Overall, each sport has its own unique method of playing, so players have to train themselves accordingly. There are numerous sports which demand players to be physically fit so that they could outperform their competitors. For example, in wrestling the player needs to defeat the opposition using strength. So it's pivotal for the wrestler to enhance their strength to outclass the opposition and to achieve the required strength it is mandatory to train physically.
However, just relying on physical strength doesn't help an athlete to achieve success. It's vital that they train themselves mentally too because being mentally stable could prove to be motivational for player and they could achieve something unrealistic against all the odds. Mental strength could boost a players moral and reduce the stress before a game because it doesn't allow our emotions to get better of ourselves. For example, 40 years old Roger Fedrar won the tennis match in five hours even after being 2 sets down at the beginning of match. this demonstrates that if we have the will power to achieve something we can perform efficiently irrespective of opponents strength.
To conclude, both physical and mental strength are vital for an individuals success in sports. Although how much physical strength is required depends on the type of sport, being mentally strong is essential because it makes athletes believe in themselves.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
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Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31985294118 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68185614836 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.111116174084 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100970901938 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203088246972 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907869137468 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
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flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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