Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the
country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Whether a country should host international sports events is a controversial point in arguments. While some people think that it is not necessary, I agree with those who believe the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, the catastrophe that those events make to the country is undeniable. The volume of traffic will definitely increase during the event, therefore having an impact on the environment. Trashes can be seen everywhere after the crowd leaves, and much more resources will be needed to tidy up the mess. Furthermore, the funding spent on those events is surprisingly huge. Despite the earnings of hotels, restaurants and resorts, that amount of money will inevitably make the government curb the spending on social welfares to invest on the field.
On the other hand, the event is a stimulus for sports investment and promotion. Seeing the athletes setting new records and breaking their limits motivates youngsters to take up sports, with the inspiration of emulating their heroes. The economy is also benefited, too. The enormous revenue from souvenirs, tours and sports tickets, which comes from the influx of foreign sports fan all over the world, can be utilized to other sources, such as sports funding, social welfares and schooling.
Altogether, worldwide sports events has their own disadvantages, but the merits made by them can compensate the damage. Events will definitely be larger and larger in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether a country should host international spo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25431034483 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80616028109 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2937265457 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194717213552 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064519478073 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693538129541 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128715693924 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112050915178 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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