The line graph illustrates the information about income per annum of three bakeries in London from 2000 to 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Overall, the income of Lovely Loaves decreased over the period given, while for Robbie's Bakery and Bernie's Buns, it rose. At the start of the period, yearly income of Lovely Loaves was the highest among others, which was replaced by Robbie's Bakery from 2006 to 2010, and following that Bernie's Buns' income became a bit widely consumed one between two bakeries in the final years.
With regards to the amount of money earned by Bernie's Buns, it began at exactly £ 20000 and then fluctuated slightly around £ 40000 before rising dramatically to about £ 65000 in the last year. Likewise, Robbie's Bakery earned approximately £ 55000 in the first year after which the figure rose slightly and then dramatically to around £ 105000 in 2010.
On the other hand, Lovely Loaves started to earn in 2000 at around £ 80000. This figure, which reached a high of just over £ 90000 a year later today, fell slightly in the final years to exactly £ 40000 in 2010.
- The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth 73
- The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London 2000 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£20000'.
Suggestion: £20000
...ed by Bernies Buns, it began at exactly £ 20000 and then fluctuated slightly around £ 4...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£40000'.
Suggestion: £40000
...000 and then fluctuated slightly around £ 40000 before rising dramatically to about £ 6...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£65000'.
Suggestion: £65000
...000 before rising dramatically to about £ 65000 in the last year. Likewise, Robbies Bak...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£55000'.
Suggestion: £55000
...se, Robbies Bakery earned approximately £ 55000 in the first year after which the figur...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£105000'.
Suggestion: £105000
...lightly and then dramatically to around £ 105000 in 2010. On the other hand, Lovely Lo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£80000'.
Suggestion: £80000
...oaves started to earn in 2000 at around £ 80000. This figure, which reached a high of j...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£90000'.
Suggestion: £90000
...gure, which reached a high of just over £ 90000 a year later today, fell slightly in th...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£40000'.
Suggestion: £40000
... slightly in the final years to exactly £ 40000 in 2010.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, likewise, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75647668394 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27903897101 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0438082487 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157254682173 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785542116142 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909518144898 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115940251321 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847025396704 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£20000'.
Suggestion: £20000
...ed by Bernies Buns, it began at exactly £ 20000 and then fluctuated slightly around £ 4...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£40000'.
Suggestion: £40000
...000 and then fluctuated slightly around £ 40000 before rising dramatically to about £ 6...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£65000'.
Suggestion: £65000
...000 before rising dramatically to about £ 65000 in the last year. Likewise, Robbies Bak...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£55000'.
Suggestion: £55000
...se, Robbies Bakery earned approximately £ 55000 in the first year after which the figur...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£105000'.
Suggestion: £105000
...lightly and then dramatically to around £ 105000 in 2010. On the other hand, Lovely Lo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£80000'.
Suggestion: £80000
...oaves started to earn in 2000 at around £ 80000. This figure, which reached a high of j...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£90000'.
Suggestion: £90000
...gure, which reached a high of just over £ 90000 a year later today, fell slightly in th...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '£40000'.
Suggestion: £40000
... slightly in the final years to exactly £ 40000 in 2010.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, likewise, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75647668394 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27903897101 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0438082487 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157254682173 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785542116142 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909518144898 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115940251321 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847025396704 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.