Knowledge is an awareness of a particular or more fields. It suffices to say that knowledge is instrumental to the production of the technological devices or equipment we see around us today. it's exactly the way my Dad puts it, 'A man without knowledge is a man without direction'. However it is equally true to say that with more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious as I am going to explain in this essay.
Firstly, when one acquires knowledge he is exposed to a harder area of knowledge that he is formerly aware of. He by his own volition seeks another area of study more difficult than what he already knows in a bid to solve current challenging problem which he is facing. Take for instance the idea of the stove which uses kerosene as a source of energy to cook meals, this invention required the use of knowledge which as we all know but this also creates a challenge which is how to curb the resultant soot that comes from using kerosene stove, a complex and mysterious issue at that point. An American inventor sums it up in these words "Technology solves one problem and creates more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...es or equipment we see around us today. its exactly the way my Dad puts it, A man w...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t knowledge is a man without direction. However it is equally true to say that with mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 2235.4752809 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62745098039 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79410044714 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7462870377 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38442990703 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162349193998 0.0831039109588 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176186519065 0.0758088955206 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314511369071 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152379023842 0.0667264976115 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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