Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
To What extent do you agree or disagree?
A Recent trend in bollywood, film stars are well known for their glamour and money instead of their success in the film industry and this sets a wrong impression on youngsters. I completely agree with the above statement and i shall explain viewpoint in the preceding paragraphs.
To begin with, media covers all the events and share with the public through news channel, how celebrity living their lifestyle that includes clothing, house, living and which luxury cars they drive. To portray, channel present the latest photographs of superstar in headlines. Youth follow their living style and enact like celeb. Through this adults get influence. For example, If a star worn an expensive pair of shoes, that becomes a hot topic for media. This topic stretch the entire week until it goes viral.
Additionally, fairness products advertised by actors and actresses to looks beautiful among all. That one of the marks of celebrity life. Teenages attracted most to look better than others. They apply these products in real life, do not know if a celebrity follows or not. Moreover, without thinking of outcome.,blindly takes course. For instance, Fair and lovely face promotes fairness and beauty from dark complexion to fair complexion within 4 weeks by Kareena kapoor. Many of them choose the beauty products.
To conclude, the media plays a vital role to show off the life of a celebrity. A young generation going in the wrong direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, well, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10970464135 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64110080919 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691983122363 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1380507085 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2352941176 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195421916326 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459187281734 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490973211487 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101588461132 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623714752445 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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