Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or orgainsation.
why might this be the case?
what could be the disadvantages of self-employed?
In modern times, more and more people like to establish their own startups instead of working under someone's organisation. There could be some reasons behind this trend and there are some drawbacks to be an owner. This essay will discuss about these in upcoming paragraphs.
The first reason for opting self-employment which may provide freedom. Self-employed do not need to work under someone's commands, rules, and regulations. Person is his own boss. That is why, many people specially young adults those may not like to work in limits. Secondly, employees work and get a limited or set amount of salary every month. However, employers may earn a lot more. Thus, many talented and creative people may not want to waste their skills to get some limited some of money and they try their hands in their own ventures.
Everything has two aspects, being a self-employed also brings some difficulties. First risk is loosing invested money in the market. In this totally compatitive era, market predictions may be very hard to do. One may lose his all investments if something goes wrong. Moreover, employees usually have a start and finish time of their work on daily basis but sometimes owner has to give his duty from start to end. For example, like some stores or shops owners have to present from starting and closing of their shops.
In conclusion, becoming a self-employed may bring some disadvantages like risk to his invested money or having hard duty times. But it may be worth doing when hardwork pays off in terms of profit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
...r own startups instead of working under someones organisation. There could be some reaso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92337164751 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63346909904 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4537621806 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3888888889 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250155026792 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794689138449 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712816340158 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159741752866 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127667972115 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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