Hi John,
How are you?, I hope you are doing great. Its been long time we haven't met. As you have asked for my advice about studying the same course as me, so here is my recommendation on this important decision, I hope it will count in making a good choice.
I have done Automotive Service Technician Diploma from Vancouver Community College. It is an excellent course for you as you have keen interest in automotive which makes it one of the best options for you to choose. It is a high paying sector and demanding job and making it as career will be easy-breezy for you.
The college has the best infrastructure, faculty, and culture. It also has modern equipment and tools to use. Moreover, the instructor here is red seal certified and minimum of 20 years of experience in the field through which you can learn some extra tricks to work in a real world. To add on, they also have a very good reputation in Automotive industry and have some tie up with companies which will make it unchallenging to step in the field. With that they have a real shop where you do practical while working on customer vehicle which is the best challenging thing.
You can apply from their website or by going at admissions office which is located in downtown campus. There you will need to fill out the admission form and show them high schools marks. They do not have high requirement of grades like other colleges or university, so it will easier for you to get in.
Take care and see you soon.
Warm Wishes,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55109489051 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53139749027 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7014524436 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9375 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170203677479 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536256888527 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604152445809 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105491588593 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584753641644 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.