Your friend recently moved to the same town you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together.
In your letter
describe why you go to this gym
say what part of this gym you recommend
explain why you think it is suitable for your friend
Dear Xiao,
Welcome to Markham! Is everything ok with your moving?
I am writing to invite you to come to LA Fitness Center and work out together with me. This gym is large and has all kinds of equipment. There are also different classes available for Black Card Member, including yoga, Zumba and basketball. I am attending the basketball class right now and I find it quite helpful for improving my skills.
Unlike regular gyms in which I would feel a bit boring working out. LA Fitness Center has quite a lot of entertainment and relaxation facilities that we can enjoy. There are 10 big-screen HD TVs mounting on the ceiling for us to watch while exercising. In the meantime, it has several message rooms which are equipped with the most advanced hydro-massage chairs for relaxation after exercising, which is extremely comfortable. You must give it a try when you come.
As I heard from you last time, you were kind of getting weight recently. The classes available in this gym is perfect for you to lose weight with reasonable amount of work. The hydro-massage chair could help you relax and not to be exhausted, which is the reason why I recommend it to you.
Hope you can come and join me in the gym! Looking forward to your response.
Best wishes,
Jerry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s the reason why I recommend it to you. Hope you can come and join me in the gym...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77578475336 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66672531724 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6696152592 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298895060973 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949567218595 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793177585513 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17228254565 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685061990613 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.