The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.
The bar chart shows the number of students who have chosen certain university subjects and broken down by men and women. These subjects are as diverse as Sciences, Mathematics, Social Sciences, Languages, Humanities, the Arts, Literature, and Law.
Specifically, when looking at the chart, the highlights are Sciences and Social Sciences, these two subjects are chosen by a large number of students (Sciences with more than 30,000 students, Social Sciences with nearly 40,000 students). Next are two subjects Mathematics and Language, these two subjects also have a large number of choices (Mathematics is nearly 25,000 students and Language is nearly 20,000 students ). No less are Humanities and Literature subjects (Humanities with more than 20,000 and Literature with more than 25,000), interestingly, men and women have almost the same number of choices in Humanities and men choose Literature more female. Law and the Arts subjects were chosen the least, in Law the number of choices for women was half that of men (total 15,000 students), and in the Arts, the number of choices was very low (nearly 15,000).
The number of male selections is almost evenly distributed in all subjects and the most chosen ones are in Sciences and Mathematics (Scientists with more than 20,000, Mathematical with nearly 20,000), whereas women choose very few of these subjects (Science with 10,000 and Mathematics with nearly 5,000). Women have strengths in Social Sciences and Language (Social Sciences is nearly 25,000 and Language is nearly 20,000) and that is also the opposite for men when the number of male choices is quite modest compared to women's in this subject (respectively. nearly 15,000 and about 2,000).
Thereby, we can see the characteristics of each gender: men often choose intellectual and logical subjects, while women often choose gifted subjects. In the future, both sexes may have different choices and the estimated number is unpredictable.
Phan Tieu Bang M06 - B2109231
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ences, these two subjects are chosen by a large number of students Sciences with more than 30,000...
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Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... Language, these two subjects also have a large number of choices Mathematics is nearly 25,000 st...
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Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s and Language is nearly 20,000 students . No less are Humanities and Literature s...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nearly
...to womens in this subject respectively. nearly 15,000 and about 2,000. Thereby, we ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30031948882 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70720137401 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44089456869 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9923021865 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169996000427 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880122327877 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133364406312 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11539686459 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133484303323 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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